Topic: Social Interaction in Second Life
Thesis Statement: In Second Life, resident's are free to interact socially with one another while attending churches, schools, and networking locations.
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- Neil
- Lets see. I am a 21 year old guy. I attend the University of Central Missouri. I am majoring in Nursing. I like to hang out with my friends, talk on the phone, take pictures, and party. Anything else you want to know just ask.
neil, you are to not only have three to four main points as part of your thesis statement that actually relate to your topic...but your thesis statement is a bit confusing...if you are talking about social interaction, then you should at least suggest that in your thesis statement..."in second Life, residents are free to interact socially with one another while attending churches....." see the difference? you don't have that suggestion in your thesis statement...revise please...also it appears you missed the deadline for your introduction...
ReplyDeleteYes, I see the difference. Thanks for the suggestion. And I didn't submit my introduction because I did not know where to start. You gave me a lot of insight on how to write the paper at our conference we had the other day. Thanks again.
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