Friday, February 6, 2009

Essay One Introductory Paragraph

Second Life is a terrific place to meet people from near and far, and the bonds we share in-world can venture to heights that extend beyond one's own imagination. Every time you log into Second Life you never know who you might meet. In one session you may interact with straight, gay, lesbian, bisexual, and transgender (GLBT) persons. Most people tend to keep their private lives behind closed doors and never speak about it freely in public. However, the beauty of Second Life is that you are free to be whoever you want to be without being judged. In Second Life residents are free to visit sex clubs, watch movies with sexual content, join sex groups, and even request sexual acts in-world.

2 comments:

  1. pretty good neil...correct the following:

    in one session you might interact with "both"...the word both suggests just two...but you list several...so revise that sentence...... Sex is not taboo in western society...discussing it publically might be...revise that...other than that, nice going...should be an iteresting paper...

    dr. c

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  2. I made the corrections you wanted me to make. Is it correct now?

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